Kingdom Hearts Namine

Some criticism coming right up! First of all, I can see that you draw traditionally , and this picture was most likely taken a camera rather than scanned, so if you scan your drawings instead, they would be much more appealing. Secondly, you should consider adding shades and highlights, adding shades and highlights with tradtional shouldn't be hard, shading is applying a darker color and highlights are just softly erasiing the colors, and third, you should add a gleam on her eyes, eyes are the window to the soul(IDK who said this) All in all, it's really good, if it were line art alone, I'd say you did great, don't worry about coloring, you'll improve.